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Hump Day Hook: Personal Training

May 1, 2013 by Harper Bliss 12 Comments

Personal Training

This week’s Hump Day Hook is from my brand new short story Personal Training, which will be released very soon. Here’s a taste already.

I have no idea what she says next. I’m enthralled by the flush in her cheeks and the excited tone of her voice. I hardly notice that I bring a finger to her lips, silencing her. My body seems cut off from the common sense that’s supposed to keep me from touching her. Reputation is everything in this town. If word gets out…

ā€œJan?ā€ I feel lips moving against the tip of my finger. I focus my gaze and meet Ali’s big blue eyes. I know I should retract my finger and apologise as profusely as possible, but I can’t. After hours of admiring her strong body, her tenacity and unbreakable willpower, something inside me gives.

She goes wide-eyed, but doesn’t push my hand away. I move in closer, cupping her chin with my palm. Maybe I should say something, but I have no idea what. So I kiss her. I lean in and plant my lips on hers. Instantly, I’m dizzy with lust. Until she pushes me away by the shoulders.

ā€œExcuse me?ā€ Ali’s expression is more amused than annoyed. I can see in her eyes this is not a dismissal. I can see it in the way she tilts her head and bats her lashes.

This is my gym, I think. I’m in charge. I stand to face her. ā€œI’ve wanted you since the first time you walked in here.ā€ I bring my hands to my sides, as if I’m casually explaining a new exercise. ā€œI thought it was time you knew.ā€ In the frenzied state my mind is in, there’s no room for rejection.

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Comments

  1. Jessie Lansdel says

    May 1, 2013 at 7:41 pm

    Beautifully sensual and very sexy. I loved reading this and wanted much more. Thank you.

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  2. Catherine Green says

    May 1, 2013 at 8:58 pm

    Taking the situation in hand, I like it! The tension was evident in this excerpt, nicely done.

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  3. Jessica Subject says

    May 1, 2013 at 10:58 pm

    That is great! I love her hesitation at first. šŸ™‚

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  4. Adriana Kraft says

    May 1, 2013 at 11:41 pm

    Oh, I love this! I love the layers of what she’s thinking, feeling, doing, trying to objectively observe and control what she can’t. Great hook!

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  5. Vallory Vance says

    May 2, 2013 at 9:24 am

    Very sexy scene. Certainly want to know Ali’s thoughts.

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  6. Harper Bliss says

    May 2, 2013 at 12:36 pm

    Hey ladies, because you were all kind enough to comment and it’s HDH Giveaway week, I’ll send you all a free copy of Personal Training once it’s out (next week)! Happy humping! šŸ˜‰

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  7. C.C. Williams says

    May 2, 2013 at 12:48 pm

    Hot, hot, hot! Go team!

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  8. kerrianne Coombes says

    May 2, 2013 at 4:29 pm

    Oh, i love it!

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  9. Lucy Felthouse says

    May 2, 2013 at 5:54 pm

    Very sensual, loved it. Well done!

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  10. Ellen Cross says

    May 2, 2013 at 6:09 pm

    Gorgeously descriptive, and I love Ali’s reaction to an amazing kiss!

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  11. Cassandra Dean says

    May 3, 2013 at 8:41 pm

    Phew, what a hook! Love the take charge nature of it šŸ˜€

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  12. Harper Bliss says

    May 4, 2013 at 11:31 am

    Thank you all! Keep an eye on your inbox for a special goodie from me! šŸ˜‰

    Reply

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