Here we go for another round of Hump Day Hook-ing. This one’s from Fool for Love, the first novella in my High Rise series.
“Where does it hurt?”
“Around here.” Alex pointed at a spot above her right shoulder blade.
“At your service, madam.” Maddie scanned Alex’s tank top-clad back. “I wouldn’t want to stain your clothes though. Would you mind if I pulled your top up?”
“Of course not.” Alex beat her to it and in one swift movement her back was bare, apart from the straps supporting her bra. Maddie stood there swallowing the dryness out of her throat. A naked back usually didn’t have this effect on her, but not all naked backs looked as perfectly sculpted as this one. She was almost afraid to touch it, scared she would ruin it somehow.
“Thanks.” She reached out her hand until her fingertips touched Alex’s shoulder, the electricity zapping through her flesh overwhelming her. “I’m going to lower these a bit.” Slowly, she brushed the straps of Alex’s bra down her shoulders. “Just for better access.” Maddie squirted some oil in her hand and heated it between her palms.
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Jessie Lansdel says
Hmmm, something tells me she’s not going to stop at the bra….Very sensual hook. Lovely. ☺
Sarah Cass says
Very sensual…nice hook.
Elin Gregory says
Very nicely described. I like the touch about her warming the oil in her hands.
Mandy Earles says
Oh, a very sensual massage. I wonder what she’ll do next. If she’ll have the guts to do more 😉
Alexandra Anthony says
Nice, sexy teaser! Great hook!
C.R. Moss says
oooh, sounds like they’re on their way to something hot! good hook! 🙂
Harper Bliss says
Thanks for the lovely comments… Let’s keep on Hump-Day-hook-ing!
Kathleen Grieve says
Great hook! I wonder if Maddie’s nerves show? Does Ale notice? More please!